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KentAshbyKorb
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since 2013-05-05
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Nc USA

0 posted 2014-03-19 02:42 PM



I'll never love you less
I swear I'll love you long
With magic and caress
I know my love is strong
Despite the pain, distress
The sorrow in my song
To dress you with my blessing
Love!
I'm moving on!

Yesterday afforded us some hopes and dreams
How the winds passed by them seems
To taunt my dreams
Although it's in the past
May have been all along
I know the hope afforded by your lovely song
Told me tales of wonder, joy and sweet delight!
Many times I held them fast into the night
But now I know it's time
And so I sing this song
Goodnight to you my love
Good night!
I'm moving on..

They said I'm on a journey
While adventure's yours
All along my burning
Seemed to scorch the map
Blowing hard and high I found this heavy Gail
Lent me nothing but to bid you happy trails
When, if ever, will this pain subside and pass?

Dear I hope you know I'll keep you all along
Despite the ache, though my heart breaks
I'm moving on!!!

I hope you take it with a smile to travel on!
I pray your joy be made In full!
I'm moving on!

"Striking thoughts make my mouth thunder as I brain storm."

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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2014-06-08 11:17 AM


This is beautifully penned. I know what this feels like if you are talking about moving on after a bad relationship or at least ending it with someone you loved. I truly enjoyed the read! 😃

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


latearrival
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Posts 5499
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2 posted 2014-06-08 11:24 AM


KentAshbyKorb,Oh how much do I love this? Very Very.At last a true love song of goodbye.It happens that sometimes one must move on and those who are left should accept with equal love and treasure the love that was given in truth.Best to you on your journey Jo Perry
Michael
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3 posted 2014-06-08 11:25 AM


A lovely, if sad, ballad.  One I could truely relate too.

Michael

kingsangel
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since 2009-11-04
Posts 50

4 posted 2014-06-11 05:17 PM


Two thumbs up....I LOVED this one,,,,and it is sooo hard to do....carry love with you and move on isn't it?


amk377
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since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina
5 posted 2014-06-13 07:23 AM


Sometimes this is all we can do. Moving on is necessary  to heal. Very hard though. I can relate!!

"If you can dream it, you can achieve it"

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