Open Poetry #49 |
I'm moving on. |
KentAshbyKorb Member
since 2013-05-05
Posts 99Nc USA |
I'll never love you less I swear I'll love you long With magic and caress I know my love is strong Despite the pain, distress The sorrow in my song To dress you with my blessing Love! I'm moving on! Yesterday afforded us some hopes and dreams How the winds passed by them seems To taunt my dreams Although it's in the past May have been all along I know the hope afforded by your lovely song Told me tales of wonder, joy and sweet delight! Many times I held them fast into the night But now I know it's time And so I sing this song Goodnight to you my love Good night! I'm moving on.. They said I'm on a journey While adventure's yours All along my burning Seemed to scorch the map Blowing hard and high I found this heavy Gail Lent me nothing but to bid you happy trails When, if ever, will this pain subside and pass? Dear I hope you know I'll keep you all along Despite the ache, though my heart breaks I'm moving on!!! I hope you take it with a smile to travel on! I pray your joy be made In full! I'm moving on! "Striking thoughts make my mouth thunder as I brain storm." |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is beautifully penned. I know what this feels like if you are talking about moving on after a bad relationship or at least ending it with someone you loved. I truly enjoyed the read! 😃 When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
KentAshbyKorb,Oh how much do I love this? Very Very.At last a true love song of goodbye.It happens that sometimes one must move on and those who are left should accept with equal love and treasure the love that was given in truth.Best to you on your journey Jo Perry |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A lovely, if sad, ballad. One I could truely relate too. Michael |
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kingsangel Member
since 2009-11-04
Posts 50 |
Two thumbs up....I LOVED this one,,,,and it is sooo hard to do....carry love with you and move on isn't it? |
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amk377 Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58South Carolina |
Sometimes this is all we can do. Moving on is necessary to heal. Very hard though. I can relate!! "If you can dream it, you can achieve it" |
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