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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-03-16 08:16 PM



one o’clock in the morning
sitting here
looking out the window
moon bright
moon very bright tonight
lights up the lethargic Bayou Lafourche
a glass of red wine
all is right with the world
no . . .
it isn’t
something is different about tonight
something which makes the hairs on my arms
tingle and stand rigid
on the window something gives unto the night
this is a good time to sit and ponder
everything is quiet
no daytime noise
nothing
quiet as that preverbal church mouse
and yet
there is something not right
my mutt makes a keening sound
walks to the door
sniffs . . .
comes back to look imploringly at me
do something, man
she seems to say
and so I do
I rise and close the blinds
and as I do . . .
on the window something gives unto the night

©March 9, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-16-2014 11:00 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2014-03-17 06:51 AM


That just gives me the creeps. I'm glad I'm reading this in the morning and I'm not alone.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-03-17 08:07 AM


Good morning, Lori. Sorry about giving you the creeps. Thanks for being here anyway.

~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

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