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Namyh
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0 posted 2014-03-15 12:54 PM


The Next Stop

High upon the pink hilltops, one breeze above the red treetops,
stars punctured night sprinkling clouds with purple hue
which caused the falling gold moonbeams
to filter down in almond streams
and flame my eyes with Beauty of an alien planet’s view.

There I was transfixed by majesty without conflict,
enrapt by a silence throbbing soundless at my ears
whose symphony made the colors thunder
across my eyes to wake from slumber
the Awe that senses flood to wonder what Architect worked here.

Then Dawn’s breathless yawning rippled pecan light thru morning
on my landcraft now approaching with its rush of silken roar.
Overhead, it passed a tree turned and landed close to me.
When I stepped inside, the capsule shut closed and sealed its door.

Up! Up! It whisked me. Ground fell from my feet,
passing clouds that hovered in the upper atmosphere
which stood as guard and sentry
‘gainst all outlaw cosmic entry
when my capsule docked so gently in my Starship, by my chair.

Automatic did the buckles strap my chest and legs and knuckles.
Jaws tensed, preparing for the up and coming jolt
in a silence made long lasting
'til I felt that rocket blasting.
Then, I closed my eyes. I took one breath, just before the bolt.

Straight to lightning warp-speed, thrown back in my seat,
control and throttle gauges blinked their lights upon my berth.
-Unzipped did I my flight suit.
-Unlatched my helmet's visor too
to read what was my next stop. Ahh! that planet they call Earth.
Are they civilized yet?

Namyh

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-03-15 01:34 PM


Hope this is the first of a continuous trilogy maybe. Would like to see and understand what the aliens think of earth and it's inhabitants.

~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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2 posted 2014-03-16 06:35 AM


me too!

Lori

Namyh
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3 posted 2014-03-18 07:26 AM


JerryP – An alien species intelligent enough to watch us would doubtless discover our historic jumps from violent mayhem to  inventive nobility, a scary behavior which no doubt demands an explanatory ‘trilogy’ by an Earth inhabiting poet. I’ll think on that one. Thanks for stopping by to enjoy Jerry. Namyh
Namyh
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4 posted 2014-03-18 07:29 AM


Lori – Me too….me too! Thanks for making this your ‘next stop’ Lori. Namyh
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