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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-03-15 07:46 AM




I hardly recognize
myself

The toll
has been taken
on my body

The pounds
haven’t been kind
to my profile

The years
are taking their time
on my face

The thought
has settled
in my mind

The hill
I am over
To my dismay

  





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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-03-15 01:22 PM


I can unfortunately relate,  Lori.

~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-15-2014 02:08 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2015-08-01 05:36 PM


life goes forward with or without our cooperation...james
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2015-08-01 09:38 PM


Yeah, I have tried every approach possible with mirrors and other reflective surfaces and this old (gaseous expletive here!!) keeps jumping between me and . . . well, ME!

I know for from where you come!!

cool piece,

j.

Redstart
Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

4 posted 2015-08-02 02:07 PM


We're 21 inside, Lori. Never mind that mirror, it lies.
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2015-08-02 07:39 PM


All our 'earth-suits' inevitable fall victim to entropy and Time's fugacious whimsy; hopefully our consciousness (spirit-energy) beings do not !
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