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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2014-03-15 01:43 AM



She is a brightness,
Colored by the atmosphere,
That which shines to her
Reflects back more beautiful,
Her soft auras are wonder.

Gloom

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Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
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Phaedra's Womb
1 posted 2014-03-15 03:46 AM


If not for the sun
Satellite moon shines not
Merely a cold rock
Along for a free ride


Touch, but don't look

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-03-15 07:49 AM


I love moon poetry. This is very nice. Enjoyed much!

Lori

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2014-03-16 10:21 AM


reminding me of when~~~ I was a Moonchild
MM

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
4 posted 2014-03-16 11:06 AM


Ahhh . . . And this then is the beauty of Moon Women.

~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2014-03-22 03:26 PM


Lovely write, Professor.
                     Ida

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2014-03-24 05:43 AM


And when the gloomy Professor sees the wonder it is a delight to bask in his poetic beauty.

Margherita

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