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Jack Napes
Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-03-14 01:42 AM


The sands
we once
walked on
keep falling
to the
bottom of
the vial

I reach
out each
time they
do and
turn it
over gently
...and smile

Touch, but don't look

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2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2014-03-14 03:25 AM


so lovely, we are tied with time in a poetical way, indeed,

thanks a lot


yann



Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-03-14 03:00 PM


The smile in the poem is contageous. clever concept.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2014-03-14 03:13 PM


This is a very good one, Jack.

~*~ Being captured is beside the point,
the point is not to surrender.-- Nazim Hikmet ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2014-03-24 10:33 PM


nice...James
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