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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2014-03-13 10:25 PM




She Is


Her lipstick tasting
like juicy round cherries
early in the morning
her lips
hitting me hard
as I gasp
for the morning air
in a fine position
to give all I have
and to take all she can give,
this time we of one mind
and she is so fine.


JamesLee
12March
2014


    


  

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2014-03-13 10:30 PM


'slice of life' Romanticism most pleasant indeed!
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-03-13 10:52 PM


A nice way of remembering.

~*~ Being captured is beside the point,
the point is not to surrender.-- Nazim Hikmet ~*~

Kaoru
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3 posted 2014-03-14 01:53 AM


Juicy round cherries...

Love it. Love this!

2islander2
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4 posted 2014-03-14 03:23 AM


this is a lobely communion, with the loved one, and words shine, thanks a lot

yann


Michael
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5 posted 2014-03-15 01:02 AM


A good place to be my friend.  Enjoyed the read.

Michael

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6 posted 2014-03-15 03:53 AM


...and to think of the audacity of some who still believe the best part of waking up is a cup of Folgers!

Touch, but don't look

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2014-03-18 10:18 PM


Thank you secondhanddreampoet, Jerry, Kaoru, 2islander2, Michael and Jack for the nice responses...James
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8 posted 2014-03-27 11:11 PM


Enjoyed this! Paints a vivid picture!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2014-04-09 10:21 PM


thank you hunnie girl for the nice response...James
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