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KentAshbyKorb
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since 2013-05-05
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0 posted 2014-03-12 04:07 PM



Come and read my palms
And see
Gods own hand, his lines drawn
Upon me
Five points
Opposable thumbs
Prints
Power
My DNA
A river running through me
Gooey
Pumping
Every moment of the hour
Until I shrink
Back
Into the soil
My oil gone
My heart silent
Wilted
Kneeling low
My palms crossed
Until I rise again

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Jack Napes
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Phaedra's Womb
1 posted 2014-03-12 05:42 PM


Sensitive poetry Kent.

The lines of our hands tell a poignant story indeed.

Touch, but don't look

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2014-03-13 10:14 PM


enjoyed...James
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2014-03-14 01:55 AM


I enjoyed the picture you drew for me in this, palms and rivers flowing, life and life after life..


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