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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
a tear rose to the sky followed by others alike to form a puffy white cloud more and more tears rose up and soon the cloud grew heavy and dark before long the tears could stay aloft no longer so they fell as rain upon us you and I ran for cover our faces so wet with rain we could no longer see our tears ...dedicated to the memory of our happy tears Touch, but don't look |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
I absolutely love the imagery of this poem! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Neat getting back to the tears unseen. ~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Talk about a tear jerker, you had the tears going every which way. Seriously, this is delightful. Lori  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like your style, Jack... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What Mike said |
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