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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-03-09 03:35 PM



Hah!
Seems the whole world
wants to get nekkid
under the covers
with everybody else.
Listen,
if you're female
let’s git nekkid with each other.
Nobody’ll notice.

©March 3, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Jack Napes
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Phaedra's Womb
1 posted 2014-03-09 04:55 PM


I can see it all '...and they lived happily ever after.

Touch, but don't look

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-03-09 05:19 PM


I guess they did.

~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2014-03-10 06:38 AM


Oh I don't know, I think sombody might notice a couple of nekkid people.  I think they might stand out, or just be outstanding!

Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-03-10 08:05 AM


Probably right, what was I thinking?

~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~

CastleGuard
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5 posted 2014-03-10 06:56 PM



Jerry - reminds me bit of Leonard Cohen's "Everybody Knows"...
...for some reason...

CG

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-03-10 07:11 PM


Hah! Thanks CG, for putting my little poem in range with the Leonard Cohen song.

~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~

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