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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2014-03-08 02:37 AM



Tossing bread on snow
She watches birds gathering,
Finches and sparrows

Gloom


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Jack Napes
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Phaedra's Womb
1 posted 2014-03-08 10:10 AM


One hell of a lot of meaning in 11 words.

Touch, but don't look

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-03-09 10:57 AM


a slice-of-life from a very long Winter ...

fine writing indeed !

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2014-03-09 12:33 PM


nice little slice~
Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2014-03-09 05:29 PM


Thank you all, this is one of my favorite forms,
perfect for slicing life or bits of nature.

Gloom

Jack Napes
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Phaedra's Womb
5 posted 2014-03-10 08:08 PM


Ya gotta be the brightest Gloom in the room.

Touch, but don't look

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