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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2014-03-07 12:04 PM

Through my eyes I see
Another excuse
Another day
Another time

Through my eyes I see
The pain you have caused
Over and over
Again and again

Through my eyes I see
A man who won't try
Let's me down hard
Breaks my heart

All these things I see
through my eyes
I bring up, I nag
I try to make you feel as I do

Then after I wonder
What do you see
Through your eyes

* it's been a very very long time since I have wrote a poem. Years!!! So I just wrote how I felt*

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

1 posted 2014-03-07 12:23 PM

What I read through my eyes is not strained.

Your gift of expressing your feelings has complimented you once again hunnie. That you felt moved to write this may be a calling.

Follow your heart as you answer.

...Regards from Jack

Touch, but don't look

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-03-07 06:35 AM

Hunnie you haven't lost your touch but you need to lose that guy.. uh I mean feeling.
Bless your heart and be good to yourself.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-03-07 07:26 AM

Writing can absolutely help a person deal with life's many problems. It sure has mine. Hang in there. Write.

~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2014-03-07 11:22 AM

Lori it's not that simple. We are married with a baby girl.
But thanks you for your kind words

Thank you all

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

5 posted 2014-03-07 01:07 PM

You are most welcome. Brightest of Blessings upon your little one hunnie!

Touch, but don't look

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

6 posted 2014-03-07 08:13 PM

Hey girl guess we both decided to come back to the words. Your poem is great you write better now even than then. Hope you are doing okay

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2014-03-14 02:11 AM

I can relate. I've been there..

Thank you for sharing what you feel in this way, it is beautiful even though it hurts.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2014-03-25 08:45 PM

nice writing...James

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

9 posted 2014-06-13 02:25 AM

Beautiful darling, those feelings are negative but your work is inspired.

Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul.

amk377
Member

since 2009-08-11

Posts 58
South Carolina

10 posted 2014-06-16 08:19 AM

Great poem!! Your words are powerful and I really liked this a lot!!

"If you can dream it, you can achieve it"

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2014-06-18 12:19 PM

Never easy, my friend, sometimes we just have to do what we have to do . . . though escape, if that's what's wanted, is always available.

Good piece...

j.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

12 posted 2014-06-24 03:09 PM

Your last line could be a key:
Why not ask and start a conversation.
(Not argument, just soft words exchanged)...

Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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