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Open Poetry #49

Haiku 'snot

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2014-03-06 02:46 PM

every time I
write an haiku someone says
that's not one at all

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-03-06 02:50 PM

This is a senryu.

~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

2 posted 2014-03-06 03:18 PM

Touche'

Touch, but don't look

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2014-03-06 04:05 PM

See, exactly....haiku, it's not

i.e. Haiku 'snot

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-03-06 07:14 PM

right

KentAshbyKorb
Member

since 2013-05-05

Posts 99
Nc USA

5 posted 2014-03-09 10:21 PM

I dig it...

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2014-03-10 01:08 PM

haiku loose itself, a former friend on an american site was very perplex about nature of haïkus,this one is delightful

have a nice day

yann

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