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Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-03-04 04:59 AM


My Master
told me
I own
every inch
I shovel
and that
he owns
every flake
that falls

Touch, but don't look

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-03-04 05:29 AM


Jack! Way Cool! I love this!!! I put it up at work. It is a very inspirational piece. You are full of surprise! I love that too! Keep keeping us on our toes!

Lori  

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (03-04-2014 08:35 AM).]

springtao
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since 2014-03-04
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2 posted 2014-03-04 07:30 PM


awesome !
Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2014-03-14 02:13 AM


woah woah...woah..

I have a soft spot for the punch packing brief poems ... knocked the wind out of me, you did.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2014-03-14 03:17 AM


delightful and kind of wise sight about winter and nature, thanks a lot

yann



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