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Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
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Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-03-03 10:26 PM


Silty linens lay
Sun-baked bayou 'gators grin
Secrets in the wind

Touch, but don't look

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2014-03-04 12:30 PM


the images made me travel and imagine, this was quite delicious

yann


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-03-04 05:38 AM


Nice poem Jack! Bayou and alligator are two things best left to the imagination. Louisianna needs to come with a warning lable.

Lori

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