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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-03-03 01:50 AM


I opened an old book,
and out of it fell a four-leaf clover

Was it marking a verse?
Saved for posterity?

I surmised that it had been forgotten

And in my conclusion I realized at last
what a haiku moment was

A moment that came and left
As moments do

To be forgotten and perhaps,
in time returned to you

The gentle hand that placed the four-leaf clover
between the pages of that old book is now gone

Let the moments you and I share
never be forgotten, though they may pass

May they rest well like the clover, between the pages
of our lives, until we meet again


Keep em' tickled...!


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-03-03 08:08 AM


what a haiku moment was
That is way cool!  Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-03-03 08:21 AM


Deeply meaningful.

~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2014-03-03 01:54 PM


a 'haiku moment' indeed!

great 'slice-of-life' write!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2014-03-04 12:40 PM


so beautiful, the secrets of a book can create and reveal delicious moments, enjoyed a lot


yann



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2015-09-25 10:37 PM


fine writing...james
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2015-10-04 08:16 PM


grand-fine writing ... I love this slice of life 'penning!'
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
7 posted 2015-10-06 03:00 AM


A nice surprise after so much time! Thank you one and all.

...just bein' Bluesy

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