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Richy
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0 posted 2014-03-01 03:04 PM


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The sky today,
seems
a little confused

The wind is changing as quick
as its mood

Earlier today it was, kind
of rowdy

Then its mind seemed really
cloudy

It’s finally freeing lots,
of tears

That it’s been holding back,
for years

The atmosphere seems quite
bipolar

The sun is trying, to sell its
solar

The air is trying
to hold its breath

A temporary, slice
of death

The owl, never
found out
who

The face of heaven’s turning blew

I love, how the whirlwinds
sing
their song

And all of the flora, dances
along

A world of branches, locked
in dance

A green embrace of pulse
and prance

Back, and forth, they swing
and sway

A drunken cloud gets carried away

Whether to or, whether
for

To the dessert, for the poor


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-03-01 04:01 PM


I need to have a quick shot of sour mash to clear my head after reading this. So many things to keep up with had my head reeling. Heh.Heh

~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~

Richy
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2 posted 2014-03-01 04:08 PM



have one for me too friend..

im still on daylight java time..


not quite yet, burp o thirty


thanks jerry  

Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
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3 posted 2014-03-01 04:41 PM


That which falls from my sky is not tears. They're more like heavily sugared frosted flakes.

A cool, graduating diversity in your poetry Richy. Too bad a drop-out like me shamed it by reading.

I like that little gal standing in Napa Valley.

Touch, but don't look

Richy
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4 posted 2014-03-01 05:14 PM



thanks jack..

i hope your flakes fall into a lake of milk so folks can enjoy the break in fasting

no shame in dropping out, especially in reading my dribble

dropping is gravity's doing..

have a great weekend




Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2014-03-01 05:27 PM


Richy your words just whirl here! You're so funny


Lori

Richy
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6 posted 2014-03-01 05:33 PM


like funny how.. what do you mean im funny.. like a clown.. like im here to amuse you.. what do you mean, funny how?

(scene from Goodfellahs)

haha

thanks Lori, i hope you have a satisfying saturday


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