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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-02-28 06:28 AM



I want to love you madly
I can not see straight
Will you hand me my glasses

LGRĀ©2/28/14

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 2014-02-28 06:33 AM


If I give you your glasses
You may not like me
It's this hump I have

...you see

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-02-28 06:36 AM


oh Igor! It never bothered me before!

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2014-02-28 07:00 AM


You never had your glasses on before!

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-02-28 07:32 AM


I think the poem Heh.Heh speaks for itself, I liked it very much.

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-28-2014 08:50 AM).]

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-02-28 07:42 AM


keep the glasses on is right, why tempt the reality to break the love spell ...lol

enjoyed this

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-02-28 08:32 AM


Jerry glad you liked the poem! I was feeling a little silly this morning  

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2014-02-28 08:33 AM


Good Point Igor! ~L
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2014-02-28 08:40 AM


Emmarose,
leaving the glasses on doesn't really matter, they just get steamed up anyway!

Lori

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9 posted 2014-03-01 11:52 AM



reminds me of the saying, love is blind..

when i was young they called me four eyes..

then i got glasses and they called me, eight eyes.. ! ...

harhar

i enjoyed this Lori..

love should be with eyes wide shut


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2014-03-01 12:15 PM


Richy
I prefer eyes wide open by candle light

Lori

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11 posted 2014-03-01 12:40 PM



you romantic you..


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 2014-03-01 02:04 PM


              


~L

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