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KJOTT
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since 2012-12-26
Posts 87
Canada

0 posted 2014-02-23 10:26 AM


A little poem I just wrote...

My self, that is, that part, the part you say is me
with shoulder's rolling, rising,
as icebergs from their glacier calf to sea

Your part, that part, that self I sense in verse
and without whom, that self, your self,
my self is lost for words
.

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2014-02-23 10:28 AM


Flows along smooth as ice!

C'mon, give us some more!

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-02-23 10:41 AM


Words lost come back as poetry.

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2014-02-23 11:35 AM


Nice work Kevin!

Lori

Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb
4 posted 2014-02-23 12:42 PM


Your muse is smiling now.

Touch, but don't look

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