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Open Poetry #49

Loose Ends

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-19 05:35 AM

if not for a loose end
I would have been there
far afield where blooms
occur only if you see them
and trees make sounds that
are the stuff of legends

loose ends that can
tighten around a neck
like a hangman's noose
choking the mind free of
its guilt, regrets and sorrows

I would have been there
if not for a loose end
just one more act of cowardice
where I allowed fear
to exceed my judgment

...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (02-19-2014 06:11 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-02-19 05:44 AM

aggg! Hit me where I live 'Teaser. Jeez, just tell everybody why don't ya?! Evidently you have good insight here.

Lori

Pweisbrod
Junior Member

since 2011-10-14

Posts 27

2 posted 2014-02-19 06:33 AM

Good stuff. Time to put on the waterproof extra big boots and get to stompin.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2014-02-19 02:21 PM

interesting 'write!' ...

sure wish I could be "choked free of
all guilt, regrets and sorrows "

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