Open Poetry #49 |
In answer to Richy 's last word story |
latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Posting here as I did not mean to take advantage of Richy's word story.But thank those who replied to it. My Last Dance I could not bear to think I would be down under deep within the ground, with only rows of name markers.It is too dark and sounds so finite. I would dread to be seen only within a Granite slab that bore my name. I am free outside I would choke and not be able to breath or see the world around me. I need to gulp and take in the air and sounds of birds chirping and sense the smell of roses. I live in the outside world. Please keep me here. cremate me and send me up in holiday pyrotechnics Where I would turn and twirl and light up the sky in my last dance of freedom . If I then come down to earth and fertilize the ground or land in water and feed the fish, I would have done my last good deed Jo Perry February 17 2014 [This message has been edited by latearrival (02-18-2014 07:26 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I feel the same way. Don't know about Richy, but I like this. ~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
There is a great feeling of joy here: quote: I'm so glad you posted it! Regards from Bluesy ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
this is very beautiful jo.. thanks again for sharing it with us all it is very special |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Richy,Blusey and Jerry Pat. I appreciate your kindness.I am not good at getting it in that box correctly.I have it spaced better on my notes. And to Richy, it was my reply to your wonderful word post. thanks to you three, for your kind words. jo |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jo this is great. I'm glad you took the idea and ran with it. Bluesy picked my favorite line. Line |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Lorie.I appreciate this coming from one so talented. jo |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Couldn't agree more, Jo. Ida |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Ida , jo |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I absolutely love this, Martyjo, as I said in Rich's poem - I was going to say especially the twirling bit, but then realised that I love all the rest of it just as much, lol! Owl |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Diana. Your words of praise delight me and entice me to try a bit more. love to you, jo |
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