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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-02-17 10:23 AM





There was a time
when I was inclined
to become entwined
and entangled in
your emotions

Your feelings
would coerce
and immerse me
in emotions
I couldn’t control

But long in coming
at long last learned
That you choose
your emotion
of each and
every moment

I can listen
I can give you
my love
and truth

But you can’t
have my peace
of heart and mind
anymore

Life is too short
I’ve grown too old
to be anything
but me
anymore


©2/17/14LGR

© Copyright 2014 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-02-17 10:32 AM


Can't blame you. As they say, go girl.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2014-02-17 10:34 AM


Bravo!

Reclaiming oneself takes a lot of courage.

It's not just a 'two-way' street out there, it's a boulevard. If that's not respected, then we break out the quill and write our own 'Rules of the Road'.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2014-02-17 11:16 AM



Jerry
Yes, well I don't need to "go" any further than inside my own skin.  That is a trip in and of itself! LOL
'Teaser
I hear you. There is a lot of truth in what you say.

Lori  

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

4 posted 2014-02-17 08:51 PM



the last verse was exceptional..

some of us go a whole lifetime never giving ourselves the appreciation and understanding we deserve..

im still working on it myself..


really enjoyed this one Lori




Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2014-02-17 10:52 PM


I'll let you in on a little secret Richy, It is easier said than done.

Lori

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2014-02-18 09:46 PM


very nice...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2014-02-19 05:47 AM


Thanks James!
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2014-02-19 06:05 AM


Thankfully, age seems to give us back ourselves.
                             Ida

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
9 posted 2014-02-19 06:10 AM


I'm finding age does give back some things as it takes away others.

Lori

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