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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-02-16 08:32 AM



I like it early

in the morning
when it is still
dark outside

I like it
in the kitchen
while the pot
is filling

I like it hot
I like it strong
but sweet…

I like the first
cup to hit the pot
as it brews

I empty it
into my cup
already waiting
with sweet milk

I pour and drink
without scalding

my sugar lust sated
Moo Juice ingested
caffeine consumed
full consciousness
resumed

I like it early

2/16/14©LGR



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-02-16 08:57 AM


Me too. Nice poem.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2014-02-16 09:06 AM


Fine tribute to Java and early morn. ...
(great 'slice-of-life' reality 'write'!)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2014-02-16 09:14 AM


Thanks Jerry!

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-02-16 09:21 AM


I'm going to keep writing slices of life until I have a whole loaf!

Thanks Lori

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-02-16 11:40 AM


I like the scene you wrote of and relate to to that early morning quiet just me there too...just make mine green tea spiked with cinnamon instead

Richy
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6 posted 2014-02-16 11:59 AM



okay you had me going there for a second but i just knew that you were going to yank the rug out at the end with a pleasant surprise..

yes nothing like the weekend mornings where you can blend your favorite brew with your favorite creamer and just enjoy.. now i want another cup myself..

terrific writing this weekend Lori.. thanks for all wonderful reads


latearrival
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7 posted 2014-02-16 12:48 PM


"I'm going to keep writing slices of life until I have a whole loaf!"

Yes Lori do this. These short slices become the whole. Enjoyed, Jo

latearrival
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8 posted 2014-02-16 12:48 PM


"I'm going to keep writing slices of life until I have a whole loaf!"

Yes Lori do this. These short slices become the whole. Enjoyed, Jo

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