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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-15 05:52 AM


parting seas
surrealistic clouds
heed the silence
of the crowds

their dance begins
their sway is still
now its only time they fill

cold grey skies loom overhead
menacing lovers upon the bed
flesh is bared in silhouette
full of passionate love and yet...

desires move across the floor
and dance for Dali evermore

...just bein' Bluesy

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Richy
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1 posted 2014-02-15 07:00 AM


ahhhh yes the dance of love and movement of life.. how befitting, the morning after

very nice bluesy


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-02-15 07:14 AM


Clever! Helps to know your Llama. Well done!

Just goes to show we are never to old to play with Dali's.

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2014-02-15 08:55 AM


Thanks so much Richy...and as for you Miss Lori, I award the coveted 'to pun is fun' trophy!

Thanks a million!

...just bein' Bluesy

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