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Rita In Laguna Beach
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Rita In Laguna Beach |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror 
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Time savors its victory For which I have no defense So I spend the whiles delicately Immersed in the memory of you I once thought the sea was telling But no, it was just me listening Listening for the sound of our breathing And the voices known only to you and I Your thick raven hair lying over my shoulder Your dark eyes limpid and possessing Slowly tracing paths to my own Your soft comforting arms around me Then... Days are longer now and shadows show the best of me But I still see, feel, and smell the rapture of those days When time was more obedient And we were so restless within it ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bluesy Makes a person say ahhh, or is it awwh, or just plain sigh? Very romantic. Perfect for the day! Happy VDay  Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very, very beautiful, Bluesy. The last stanza brought tears to my eyes. Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice poetry Bluesy Socrateaser. ~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well written... a pleasure looking back with you. Michael |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
well composed and contemplative regarding the trickster Time |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice to read...James |
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