JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-02-09
07:59 AM
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New Orleans in the summer thinking back her name was Glenda worked at The Old French Opera House not that kind of opera Glenda was a stripper went by the name of Debbie, the Debutante she had all the moves then some lived above Galatoire’s Restaurant she was hot and yeah, I was full of it walking proud a rebel just because we came together one night and stayed that way for some time we refused to jive talk about loooove that wasn’t what we were about I was about sex period she was about somebody to come home to period those strippers?| who’d ever think they could be lonely? they can be tho some of ‘em I filled a niche for Glenda somebody she didn’t have to dance for somebody who’d go to bat for her take up the slack I could do that in those days we never fought or even fussed I’d take her to work when she got off I’d take her home keep the street scums away from her maybe we’d have breakfast somewhere it’d be about daylight by then New Orleans, Louisiana, twenty-four-seven don’t you know or maybe we’d stroll through some old cemetery they bury ‘em above the ground there she liked spooky things like that funny thing about Glenda she liked to write little poems read ‘em to me and giggle we made it about a year it’s all in my book Misdemeanors & Felonies: A Memoir wouldn’t it be something if Glenda was on PiP and read this could happen I’d never know unless she spoke first cause I have no doubt Glenda wasn’t her real name either just like Paul Earnest Holkanson wasn’t mine still, wouldn’t it be funny . . .
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
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2014-02-09
08:39 AM
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A rose by any other name.... Yeah that would be something. I doubt her odds at makeing it this far are as good as yours. And you yourself beat yours. Good write!
Lori
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-02-09
08:45 AM
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I agree, Lori, she could very well be here. Appreciate your thoughts this morning.~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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2014-02-09
09:25 AM
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man you really got some skills here my friend.. writing that can only be written by experience..
instead of a rebel with a cause you're...
a rebel just.. because huh..
hahaha that was bril partner
hey you know what.. Debbie D is here..
she's dancing still around the curves of your letters
a fabulous read sir
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-02-09
09:32 AM
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Oh yeah, Richy, it was all true. Appreciate the great review.~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
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latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
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2014-02-09
12:30 PM
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Excellently written as a truth and not exploiting or suggestive. Leaves room for her to Be. Jo
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
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2014-02-09
12:32 PM
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Thank you Jo, I appreciate your "inside" appraisal.~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
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