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Richy
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0 posted 2014-02-08 12:10 PM


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Nature, taught me
how
to walk

But someone, taught me
how
to carry myself

Evolution gave, me the ability
to talk

But people, helped me find
my voice

People taught me
I,
was left

But nature taught me
what,
was write

Lying taught me
how
to stay

But truth bestowed me
to
believe

A blind man can teach us
more
about vision

Than someone who can't,
see life with perception

My candle

It burns

But the wax,
she is low

We show you,
the way

You must learn to
let go

We are the weather
of study,
and class

Enter our brainstorm
that never
will pass

We are the nurturing
fruit
of prepare

Pick it and run
and it,
will be shared

You stand on the
edge
of
know
and
ledge

You are the
oath
and the promise,
of pledge

The training we
gave you
is leaving
the station

1 plus won
is now,
your equation

Harness your will
and you
are
unstoppable

Go take the I and the M
from impossible

Thank you for letting
Us
show you the trail

Now keep pressing forward
until
you pass fail


* dedicated to all my students and fellow instructors

[This message has been edited by Richy (02-09-2014 07:45 AM).]

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latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2014-02-08 01:08 PM


Good advice and understanding.There comes a time when the pupils have to "Let Go"
and prove their worth.

In that vein here is one I wrote:

It is time to let go
please ease up on your clasp
and free my hand

it is time to plan
the rest of my life

Please start putting yours in order
so I may be free to live my own.

Jo Perry May 2002

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-02-08 02:02 PM


Love the last three lines, Richy. You dug deep and you dug well. Thought provoking words concerning your students and those who work with you. You have done your best. Now it is up to them.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2014-02-08 06:09 PM


A blind man can teach us more about vision

Than someone who cannot, see life with perception
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

My father was blind so those couple lines speak volumes to me.  There is much wisdom in your words.

Thank you for this, Richy.  

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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4 posted 2014-02-09 07:24 AM


I will share this with the students I work with. I hope it will help them see how important they are and thus how important their high school diploma is. I am an administrative assistant (glorified gofer)for a program designed to help students that are at high risk for dropping out...  Turning 18 can be the kiss of death for their education. (for a while)
Thanks for this gem of encouragement Richy!

Lori

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
5 posted 2014-02-09 07:50 AM


Chicken soup for the soul with a twist here.
Modern day gospel
I liked

Richy
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6 posted 2014-02-09 08:13 AM



Thanks so much jo for sharing your poem here..

You know I think as educators we can only teach them so much, part of my focus is to also bring out in them their instinctual knowledge that is pure and untaught..

believing in one’s self is the key to unlocking the vault of passion and the ability to succeed..

Yes you can only practice a skill under supervision for so long.. we teach them to be safe in a nest so that they can eventually leave and go build their own..

Even in my own roost I only have 1 birdie left at home, my son Ryan who is leaving soon to the Air Force.. then it’s going to be our turn to see what we've learned along the way and how we’re going to apply that for the rest of our own lives..

Thanks again



Richy
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7 posted 2014-02-09 08:18 AM



thanks Jerry..

yes there's nothing better than seeing them proceed and grow through the program.. and then watching their progression through the years after their graduation..

there's such a rewarding satisfaction in that that needs to bottled up and shared..


Richy
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8 posted 2014-02-09 08:25 AM



you're very welcome Lori Blue and thank you..

I'm sure one of your dear father's favorite breadths of view was the internal beauty of his sweet and loving daughter..


Richy
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9 posted 2014-02-09 08:43 AM



Believe me Lori G we all can get frustrated and feel like glorified babysitters every now and again when the students start acting up but we just can’t show it.. we have to be their rock and lead by example..

Yes we get our fair share of, at risk, students as well that are living day to day, sometimes even homeless and it just breaks your heart..

They have this one last opportunity to succeed in life, and they just need somebody that cares about them and people in general..

It’s funny how I think I learn more from my students than they will ever possibly learn from me

thanks for doing what you do.. I'm sure you impact folks more than you will ever know..

thank you very much for the kind words



Richy
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10 posted 2014-02-09 08:49 AM




haha yes EmmaRose that is what we do there..

in walk our raw ingredients.. we chop them up and put them in a pot of simmering opportunity and hope that in the end we have a desirable balance of flavor and sustenance..

thank you for the food for thought..

now i have to go make soup lol!


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