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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-02-07 08:00 AM




is it possible
even plausible
to finally run out of words
can your river of nouns and adverbs
etc
be staunched by unseen pressure
like a cataract
covering the brain
where I once was vigorous and words flowed
like tears from women
even though they were most times plebeian
I find myself these days
stalled at the door
of the next great novel
why
ah, that is the question
do I need diversion
a three-week drunk to restart my wordflow
maybe physical, sexual comfort
a woman
think it could be that simple
seat myself behind the wheel
of the Taurus
head west maybe
stopping along the way
at old boot-hill cemeteries
reading the weathered inscriptions
on the wooden tombstones
yes
I would like that
yes
get me out of the rut I seem to be in
see new people
different landscapes
where before I felt great hubris
I am now timorous to a fault
old age
has it finally settled around my bones
can it be curbed
or have I come to life's passage
where languor is the order of the day
and nights
ah
maybe, just maybe
I should not resist this
natural phenomenon
sit back
relax
it is merely nature taking its course
no!
I shan't surrender
to torpid interpretation
and the dulling of the senses
a trip westward
maybe
I'd like that
have to acquire a laptop
to record my journey
it is a germ of an idea
this westward trip

is it possible
even plausible
to finally run out of words

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 2014-02-07 09:19 AM


You were on such a roll Jerry, I thought you were about to answer your own question.

Keen and insightful writing, if not introspective.

Writers block coming down?

I had that once myself and you know what I did?

I wrote about it.

(P.S. I don't suspect any of us will run out of words. When we're near the edge we'll just create some more).

Regards from Bluesy

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-02-07 10:09 AM


Thanks, Bluesy, I really think I have run out of words, especially when it comes to writing another novel. I'm still chooglin' along with poetry, however.

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VAS
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3 posted 2014-02-07 10:18 AM


It certainly hasn't happened yet, don't kid yourself. Love the "cataract covering the brain" reference, very novel.

And your words don't just pour on the page here, they are descriptive and succinct, though not terse. Enjoyed!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-02-07 10:38 AM


Much obliged, Virginia, for the ultra nice comments this morning. They are very much appreciated.

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Richy
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5 posted 2014-02-07 12:38 PM


there are only so many words arent there my friend.. i guess its the combinations we put them in that gets harder sometimes..

my problem is balance.. too many words and not enough time..

its a curse i tell you..

a curse of verse..


good one here as always Jerry


JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-02-07 12:42 PM


"a curse of verse"

Hah! That's a good one. Thanks for your comments.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2014-02-08 10:23 AM


Westward Ho! Sometimes a change of scenery helps you sort out the wheat from the chaff so to speak. Sometimes we go away thinking we are leaving something behind only to find it came with us. A road trip, short or long, can be good for the soul my friend.

Lori

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2014-02-08 10:30 AM


Ahhh . . . Wishful thinking. The Taurus isn't to be trusted for trips, the money isn't there for them either. Heh.Heh Westward Ho! Indeed. Maybe when the lottery money comes in.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
9 posted 2014-02-08 10:42 AM


Maybe you need to revisit Mardi Gras this year to write your next novel entitled Wesdward ho! You are not to old for dreams hopes and fears so you still have novel fodder. Somehow I don't even see Death silencing you.

Lori

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2014-02-08 10:45 AM


You have given me some hope that maybe I do have another book in me. Thank you, sha, I'll think on it.

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JamesMichael
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11 posted 2014-02-08 06:12 PM


words are a little bit like the stock market...sometimes up and down with an upward trend and sometimes up and down with a downward trend...james
JerryPat2
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12 posted 2014-02-08 06:45 PM


Hah! You got that right James, thanks for stopping by.

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