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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-07 05:25 AM


May of the morning...

Rises to become my sun
Window-box flowers sing to your smile
That gives light to their petals
And life to their delicate leaves
Rooms filled with airs about you
A gift that transcends the time
That I beg to spend close by you
Now that I've found you again

May of the evening...

Glows in radiance as my lovers' moon
Tides move quietly from the shore
Whispering her name on gentle breakers
Her silvery lace flows with southern compliments
As she fills my spirit and refreshes my soul
Long will be the night she promises
And we two to know it's pleasures
'Til the sun wakes the sleeping flowers once again


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2014-02-07 05:46 AM


Blusey!
This is great! Nothig like a lover's poem first thing in the morning to get the gray matter going.  This just oozes warm images and emotions.  Beautifully done.

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-02-07 07:49 AM


I couldn't agree more with Lori. This is a delicate and very, very warm poem of love.

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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
3 posted 2014-02-07 10:24 AM


Ah, the lovely hope this final line imbues:
"'Til the sun wakes the sleeping flowers once again"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2014-02-07 06:46 PM


Many thanks to each of you for your kind responses.

Regards to all from Bluesy

...just bein' Bluesy

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2014-02-08 06:13 PM


very nice...James
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