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Open Poetry #49

Drawn Forever

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2014-02-06 07:23 PM

I wish to disappear - the smallness of
myself into the vast nature of my
being.
I seek the infinite in all of my desires.
The small movement of breath that passes on the
lips is the same air that stretches on
forever - to forget myself and remember only this - a single
breath that's drawn forever.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2014-02-06 08:31 PM

Always nice to read you, your poem made me take a deep breathe and be greatful for it.

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

2 posted 2014-02-07 09:22 AM

Like drifting into a dream at the moment you fall asleep.

Your poetry is an excellent ride.

...just bein' Bluesy

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2014-02-07 10:22 AM

I would hope you do not disappear.I know sometimes we need to set ourselves aside in order to be useful, giving, loving...but to disappear would mean I would have missed this one of yours for it would not exist, yes? It seas a good experience for my first read of your work.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2014-02-07 02:55 PM

So good to read you again.

"the smallness of
myself into the vast nature of my
being."

Yes, like that.

Helen

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2014-02-08 08:12 AM

Hey your poem made me breathe too! And read it again. I enjoyed the "breather" and the ponder!

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2014-02-08 06:14 PM

enjoyed...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2014-02-09 05:33 PM

I am here inhaling your beauty and your wisdom, dear Eric. Ahh, you are aware of our true essence and express it beautifully.

Breathing infinity with you ..,

Love,
Margherita

It's great to see you back here!

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