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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2014-02-04 02:37 PM

Where is my head?
In my shoes,
I work with
On the cold asphalt,

Where is my head ?
In stars,
I go away with them
When comes the night,

Where is my head?
In the eyes of the girls,
I wait that they tell me
In which country
I lost her…

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-02-04 03:00 PM

And the knowledge the girls impart only makes the pain more unbearable. Liked this one very much, Yann.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2014-02-04 04:47 PM

Your last verse packs quite a punch...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2014-02-04 09:40 PM

nice...James

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2014-02-05 12:24 PM

How many people can ask "in which country I lost her?"? You are a blessed man Yann.

Lori

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2014-02-05 01:42 AM

thanks blue serenade, you point it with accuracy and gently

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

6 posted 2014-02-05 01:45 AM

thaks Jerry, better not know sometimes this impart, and live of our own, thanks for the kind comment

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2014-02-05 01:46 AM

thanks james

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

8 posted 2014-02-05 01:47 AM

hello lori, reading your comment is awesome,
have a nice day

yann

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2014-02-05 02:02 AM

Charming little poem, yann.
Ida

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

10 posted 2014-02-09 05:39 PM

Smiling here, dear Yann, As long as you sail among the stars your head is safe, as for the girls ... one never knows! So cute.

Enjoyed your humorous vain here.

Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

11 posted 2014-02-10 12:54 PM

Thanks Ida,

have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

12 posted 2014-02-10 12:55 PM

a very sweet comment indeed, so nice reading you margyerita,

have a nice day

yann

Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

13 posted 2014-03-14 04:50 AM

Funny. While reading your delightful poetry, I had the distinct feeling I was thumbing through an old photo album.

Touch, but don't look

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