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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 I watch the sunbeam beaming through the window giving a glowing rectangle sheathe across my desk it is bright narrow and in a straight line I stop what I am doing remove my hands from the keyboard as I contemplate the object of my fascination I wonder what a philosopher would make of this narrow bit of sunshine would his thoughts coincide with those of the poet where a poet (me) sees so many things the sunspot represents beauty and wonderment taking it all in and writing a rhyming poem about the sunspot the philosopher would need to take it apart atom by atom to formulate a reason why it has seemed to distance itself from the father sun when he dissects and questions the rebel sunspot by the time he has done all he can do the strip of sun has disappeared never to be the same again after been analyzed which will frustrate the philosopher but the poet has his poem to relive the moment at his whim ©January 19, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Good morning.Love the photo and the poetry to match. I wish the sun was out now. best, Jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Morning to you, Jo. We have sun down here in the swamp. Good to see it. Thank you for your presence here, it is most appreciated. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello jery, what an inspiration that I consider with a lot of "respect", it means to stop and sea, to meditate and become a philosopher, this is quite a lesson of poetry, of harmony found in simple facts which are however very deep in their essence.... thanks for the very beautiful and delicate poem |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks big time for your inspirational comments on my poem this morning, Yann. I have finally discovered what was around me all these years of my life, that the most beautiful things are simple. A shaft of light. A fiery sunset. A child's innocent smile. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
"why it has seemed to distance itself from the father sun" with my youngest son joining the navy last year and my last son at home going off to the air force soon this line of your's inspired me to scribble some thoughts.. thanks friend.. a very insightful piece  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . That is the universal calling to your men to tumble from their natural nest and try to fly alone, Richy. I hope they will be safe in their new venture, and I know you are apprehensive and nervous. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you buddy.. yes to both of those feelings.. adding, proud, as well |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I totally relate..matter of fact a couple weeks ago, as the sun was setting between the bare branches, for whatever reason, one ray of sun shone through and was hitting n a spot in my backyard, fascinating me with the why of it all? liked this poem much |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I understand pride in your sons, Richy. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Emma, sometimes we walk upon something nature has presented for us to see and it takes our breath away for a few seconds. I quite understand your fascination and the need to ask the question, "Why?" ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A fascinating window, it looks like it goes above the ceiling. I first thought church corner, then corner of an old school room. Of course, being schools were often in churches it could be both. It looks like there's a railing or some pews. This piece has my creative juices running, not in such a serious poem, not with likely such beauty or depth, but I think it will hold some giddiness. We'll see. I've been dealing with low grade fever, some lowering of appetite, but mostly lowering of means/energy to fix anything more complex than microwave heating. However, about 2 hours ago I became ravenous and have finally let my self have lunch; deciding it was far enough from breakfast. Anyway, I'm having a favorite comfort food of mine and enjoying every morsel. Now, to get to the "spot" your piece is kindling. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It sure is a fascinating window that's for sure. My first thought went for a church, but a church would probably have stained glass. Anyway it suited my poem. Sorry to hear about the fever and lack of food, you must eat, Virginia, have to gain your strength back. It will be interesting to know what your creative juices will come up with. I'll be eagerly waiting for it. Thank you for your awesome comments. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Letting Go As birds are given wings to fly and soar As high as needed to survive, So sons are given heart and nerve To answer callings, so they may thrive. jo perry Feb. 2006 © copyright martyjo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I liked your answering poem, Jo, it hit the exact tone and the words were real and precise. Thank you for being here and thanks again for your stunning poem. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved the photo (naturally) and as usual with your writing, the poem. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks J, good seeing you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To stop what you were doing in order to contemplate that sunspot on your desk was a blessing to you and to us, as you shared your thoughts and your awareness of beauty with us in this inspiring write. Much enjoyed, as I am also some kind of a "sunspot fan". Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes it is the most simple things which cause us to look in wonder at them. Thank you Margherita for your nice comments concerning my poem. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sorry I was away for awhile and missed this when you first dipped it in blue. Love it! Just love it! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate that you read and commented on my poem, Lori. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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