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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2014-02-01 04:08 AM


                loves lost

perhaps we shall meet again

in some space between the spaces

beyond time’s deep dominion

past all sound and silence

where only truth and love remain

for that kiss we never had

              --- b. e. adams (2/1/2014)



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-02-01 08:07 AM


Pensive and achingly sad is this excursion into what could have been.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

2islander2
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2 posted 2014-02-01 11:08 AM


brilliant, and infinite, does an other space time exists ? yes in poetry, thanks for the very beautiful poem,

yann

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2014-02-01 02:20 PM


Thanks for your comment/replies JP and Yann !
Gale
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4 posted 2014-02-02 12:41 PM


Love your poem!
It's beautiful and piercing!
Touched me deeply!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2015-08-01 05:42 PM


fine writing...james
latearrival
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6 posted 2015-08-02 07:13 PM


Feeling your loss Bruce. As always you share your love and your heart. Jo
latearrival
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7 posted 2015-08-02 09:45 PM


No one really knows or understands but wishing might make it so.Jo
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2015-08-02 11:13 PM


I think "unrequited love" is perhaps the cruelest of all. ...
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