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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050


0 posted 2014-01-30 09:15 PM



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In the fog, I walked
to jump
in the river

And take
a nap
under blankets, of
brooks

I heard a creek
in the bed, of my
closure

And a bridge
she carried me
softly, over

I keep looking for
pastures
without
any scars

Views through my vision without
any bars

A trail where soles
can beat,
their own path

A place where my
spirit
can wash,
all its wrath

My wonder is brimming
with hinder
and hollow

A circle of zero
is easy,
to follow

Up
and down
the scent,
will go

The balm of
eternity, nobody
nose

Except for the raptor
freeing
the prey

Thank you for lovingly,
showing
the way

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2014-01-30 09:59 PM


Reads like a prayer, and your picture is truly worth every warm and wonderful thought.  

....warm hugs Richy

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

2 posted 2014-01-30 10:10 PM



you too Lori..


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2014-01-31 05:38 AM


Very thought provoking, Richy.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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4 posted 2014-01-31 09:39 PM


and that is our goal isnt it Jerry..

to one thinker maker to another, thank you


EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
5 posted 2014-02-02 02:38 PM


echoing JPat, you do stir the muse of the poet within many on here to write on

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

6 posted 2014-02-02 03:51 PM


thank you dear poet, as you do as well..


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