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Open Poetry #49

A Love That Is Mine

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-01-25 08:54 PM

A Love That Is Mine

When she would
smile at me
and take my hand
I would melt
into SuzieLand
and when I
think of those times
I realize it was then
I fell in love
for the very first time
and with this love
I travel through
the seasons of time
with a love
that is living
in my heart
a love that
will always
be mine.

JamesLee
25January
2014

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2014-01-25 08:56 PM

pure and simple Romanticism, nice 'write' !

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

2 posted 2014-01-25 09:05 PM

Lovely poem!
It reads so easily, but expresses so deep feeling.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2014-01-25 09:18 PM

Sometimes we carry those kinds of love to the grave.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2014-01-26 10:25 AM

Absolutely delightful, dear James.

Suzieland is home for you!

Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2014-01-26 12:40 PM

There you go!!

Memories do indeed last a lifetime.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2014-01-30 08:14 PM

Thank you secondhanddreampoet, Gale, Jerry, Margherita and BluesSerenade for the wonderful responses...James

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