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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2014-01-24 10:18 PM



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Wrapped in the wind
as
the raining
embraced

The dessert was pressing
up close
to her waste

It looked, to the
sky

And it sipped
from her nipple

A sigh hit the lake
and it died
in a
ripple

Lashes to flashes
and,
thrust to gust

Mettle and apathy turned,
into rust

The felt of her clothing
was, peeled
unaware

Climbing your gaze
as it
walked
up your stare

Well is a hole
in the face,
of secrete

Down where the fluid of
fables
are sweet

I’m not a
writer
I’m more,
of a wronger

Your dream is the
singer
and I
am the songer

Watching the darkness put ink
onto white

Dusk upon dawn is the vision
I cite

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2014-01-24 10:39 PM


So much to love about this beauty. Thank you for your gift of words Richy,
You string them together so effortlessly and make them sparkle in the soft light.

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

2 posted 2014-01-24 10:57 PM


thank you Bluesy..

words as such were born for eyes like yours

have a joyful weekend


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2014-01-25 06:35 PM


Ahhh . . . I greatly admire your play on words, Richy. There were subtle sensuousness within the stanzas, and outright lustful longing. I greatly enjoyed.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

4 posted 2014-01-25 07:44 PM


thank you Jerry that was very kind of you.. have a nice rest of the weekend..
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
5 posted 2014-01-25 08:21 PM


Another GOOD ONE Richy! Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
6 posted 2014-01-26 11:11 AM


quote:
It looked, to the
sky

And it sipped
from her nipple

A sigh hit the lake
and it died
in a
ripple


Ohhh! How beautifully expressed, dear Richy.

Reading your poem becomes a "happening"!

Margherita

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

7 posted 2014-01-26 01:51 PM


Thank you Kat!  


what a nice thing to say Margy dear... "a happening" yeah i'll take that!


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