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Tiptoe |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Tiptoe Once upon a dreamy landscape that I swear I saw in your smile there were five dozen awkward little raindrops carving their watery mile down the length of your elegance glow flowering is starting to show I know all over my face fixed in one sweet place beside you as the day gently sighs, "well there must be a reason why lovers dot the sun's fadeout serenade played softly on the reflection of the last song played to usher in the moon's reign" so this is how I will miss you when we part nervously tying and untying the threads of my heart to try to connect to you to try for the limitless purplescent sky tiptoe, tiptoe into your open eyes there but for my hesitant soul go I oh I... It was a dark and stormy loneliness painting hung on me until I heard your voice melt the icecaps drowning so very joyfully so nice to see me reflected in your eyes the phoenix bird is on the rise and it flies against the sunbeam all this magic that I glean from inside you, an endless flow darling could you ever let it show that footprints I leave in your wake make permanent marks that you can't ever shake a little something to accompany you across a sea of moonlight ripples till dawn spilled sunlight like diamonds across your lawn to try to get with you to try for the smile and not the frown tiptoe, tiptoe softly on down now if only I get get through to you somehow oh my... Once upon the endless easy warmth I felt from your smile there were a thousand words I wanted to say all the while to try to connect to you to try for the limitless perfection sky of you tiptoe, tiptoe right up to your door wanting oh so much more oh I oh my my Tiptoe softly through your garden gates I got limitless guaranteed love at friendly rates tell me tell me the answer to love's weighty question and once upon a dreamy landscape in your eyes I swear I saw the one the only one beneath the sun the one for me. "Heaven is paved with broken glass, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry brings so many emotions to the surface, I am truly moved every single time I read you. Just so happy to see/read you here, soul drifter. |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
Smooth and full of heart while moving through many feelings. I was in the mood for a good read so I set out to look for one. I found yours. Touch, but don't look |
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