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Flame Gypsy
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0 posted 2014-01-24 12:58 PM



Her blue eyes look upon
a clear sky
as if to ask
why.
I reply.
"It's the reflection."

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2014-01-24 01:01 PM


What an introduction! I like these short, punching poems. Welcome!
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-01-24 01:53 PM


Love your first entry at the Blue Room. Welcome.

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BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2014-01-24 04:56 PM


Very pretty poetry.

Welcome welcome!!

Margherita
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4 posted 2014-01-26 12:54 PM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry! I enjoyed your first poetic offering, it's very lovely.

Margherita

Michael
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5 posted 2014-01-26 07:24 PM


And I wondered why the skies above me were always dark... now I know.     like the analogy, and the expression.  Welcome to Passions.

Michael

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6 posted 2014-01-28 05:06 PM


Welcome to Passions!

Please, enjoy a private email that will showcase your work!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Gale
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7 posted 2014-01-29 03:57 AM


Such a lovely poem!
Enjoyed this much! )

tracie66
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8 posted 2015-02-01 07:25 AM


beautiful xx

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It is the harmony of the universe
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jwesley
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9 posted 2015-02-01 05:07 PM


Very well written!  Look forward to more from you.

j.

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2015-02-17 11:19 PM


enjoyed...james
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