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Passing through
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Passing through |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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Great northern winds possess all we had crafted, all that we sought for fruition caught in a noose of nautical torrents, perhaps never meant to recessitate, dreams once so cultivated by storm and suggestion my rose to your thorn the many miles laden with blood drenched endeavor over mountain and layered rock yearning the full term birth of us as we thrived in the blue womb though often neglected by the tides that almost delivered us starcrossed fools, tossed together temporarily, never meant for permanence, in a world disconnected [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (01-26-2014 04:48 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Unfortunately, this poem is played out so many, many times in this world we have created. Or has the world created us? Not at all sure about anything these days. You make me think, and I thank you for that. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'penning' ! we are indeed 'star-crossed fools, tossed together ... in a world disconnected' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear EmmaRose, such captivating wording and creative imagery! Impressive, really. Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
my mind is so weird.. this reminds me of the civil war.. oh my Emma.. you really do write so special.. a piece that give me so very many thoughts is a real treasure.. you really do it so very well  |
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