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Open Poetry #49

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Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

0 posted 2014-01-23 12:14 PM

Ice-slick in the street
A housewife doesn’t hurry
The eggs in her bag

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-01-23 12:34 PM

Step lightly, and that's no yolk.

(Someone had to say that Gale. I'll take the rap for the egg I laid)

Bad pun is overruled by good poetry!

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-01-23 08:02 AM

Nice senryu to start my day off right, Gale.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2014-01-23 12:57 PM

better take care this year, ice is everywhere, thanks for the delicieous images,

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2014-02-05 08:19 PM

nice...James

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

5 posted 2014-02-16 05:19 AM

Oh, thanks for the feedback! It's only a joke of course ))) I've been walking from the store and it has come to my head ) Such a slippery winter!

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