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Man Of Perpetual Darkness
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Man Of Perpetual Darkness |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror 
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Caning his way Through this world Laid deep in his marrow A single breath Shared as a sigh Never late as in gasping Nor in belated goodbyes Like a shade in the sunshine Or a shroud in the night The moon glows in reverence To the one without sight ...just bein' Bluesy |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely captured! enjoyed Kat >^..^< |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Bluesy, if this is non-fictional, and you know the protagonist (even as a regular passerby in the street), I truly hope that you have read the poem to him. If he has just one single poetry-bone in his body, he will never forget what you did. I almost wish that I was blind and a man, so that I could be that person for whom the moon shone in reverence and for whom you wrote the poem. Do you only write masterpieces? Or do you sometimes write ordinary poems? Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I absolutely relate to this special poem, Blues. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A great image you've captured with this. Good red. Michael |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Love this poem! Thank you for sharing! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Extremely poignant and beautiful indeed. Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thoughtful and warming Bluesey. I liked it very much indeed. Lori  |
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