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A Portrait |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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nymph of the wide open smile there is a cheerfulness about you you are most lovely when love comes your way into the labyrinth of stolen moments trance-like I gaze into your eyes those hazel eyes and a lovelier neck n’er before has been blissful would I be if those wine-colored lips would part for mine ah, I know the mood has passed all I can do is dream ©January 6, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton The good Lord didn't create anything without a purpose, but mosquitoes come close. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
sometimes the dream is better  truly... be grateful for the dream |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, I hear you loud and clear, Emma. I guess I'm pretty much satisfied with the dream. Thank you. The good Lord didn't create anything without a purpose, but mosquitoes come close. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nice dream, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Night dreams have a power all their own and mostly play out in random ways, but daydreams and fantasies are consciously created and can take any form at any time. Your poetry speaks of the latter in vivid detail. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think the ability to dream is a most precious gift. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much Kat . . . I appreciate your thoughts Blues . . . Thank you for being here Ida. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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