Letter to the White Imbongi

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Open Poetry #49

Letter to the White Imbongi

KJOTT
Member

since 2012-12-26

Posts 87
Canada

0 posted 2014-01-18 07:37 PM

I have experimented with making videos of poems. Ignore the ad at the end. Just want to know what I could do to improve the video, or the reading... Thanks. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISTi9M_42aw

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-01-18 10:32 PM

I enjoyed it. I could see that your mouth was dry a couple of times, but that will go away as you do more videos. You spoke slowly enough that I could understand most of your poem, and what I didn't understand was because the words were not of the English language. Congratulations! Carry on.

The good Lord didn't create anything without a purpose, but mosquitoes come close.

KJOTT
Member

since 2012-12-26

Posts 87
Canada

2 posted 2014-01-19 12:15 PM

Good point on the dryness of mouth (and throat, I remember) so I will make sure I have some water or juice on hand. Thank you for that observation.

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