Your poetry is pleasing to read Richy. I like the structure especially because it affords the opportunity to follow the overall theme incrementally, a line at a time.
Consumed slowly, it is a telling write.
...just bein' Bluesy
Richy Member Elite
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2posted2014-01-1709:31 PM
why thank you my friend.. so glad to meet you.. have a terrific weekend
Margherita Member Seraphic
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3posted2014-01-1805:38 AM
First I got lost in your picture for quite a while (you must know why!), then I got lost in your wonderful words and then I went back ... to sit near the chalet ... to savor your words again.
Wow!
Margherita
Richy Member Elite
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4posted2014-01-1807:33 AM
dear Margy, i would have to say that the words pale in comparison to your sweet friendship and lovely spirit..
thank you
EmmaRose Senior Member
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5posted2014-01-1808:54 AM
the whole poem just flies.........into the heart and mind of the reader, leaving the page with joy ! much enjoyed
Richy Member Elite
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6posted2014-01-1809:52 AM
Emma my friend you are so very kind.. thank you that means a lot coming from you