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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-01-15 08:14 AM

love’s fuse is lit
what will happen to it
depends
sometimes it has a tendency
to detonate

however
there have been times when
it glows from its core
and reaches out
keeping you cozy and warm

©December 28, 2013 / Jerry at Bolton

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-15-2014 08:45 AM).]

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-01-15 03:35 PM

Hi Jerry,

Relating to the former rather than the latter has been the unfortunate result for far too many.

Nice legs to the right however.

It's my curse to be so easily distracted.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-01-15 03:40 PM

I hear you, Bluesy, and you are quite right, love's detonate more often than it is warm and cozy it seems.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2014-01-16 01:24 AM

Nice one, loved the picture.
Kat >^..^<

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2014-01-16 03:43 AM

fortunes of love are never sure, i love the images of words ("detonate") the phograpghy is very nice too,

thanks jerry

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2014-01-16 08:06 AM

Thank you, Kat, appreciate you thoughts.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2014-01-16 08:07 AM

You have that right Yann, love's fortunes are a gamble.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2014-01-19 01:59 PM

I missed out on the picture (drat!) but loved the poem.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2014-01-19 02:15 PM

Sorry about the picture (drat yo self), but thanks for the comment.

The good Lord didn't create anything without a purpose, but mosquitoes come close.

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