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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-01-14 08:47 PM


My love lies sleeping
Silent candle wax weeping
Into pools of dreams

...just bein' Bluesy

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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-01-14 10:51 PM


Ahhh . . . Dream pools sustain us when nothing else will. Great senryu.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2014-01-14 11:18 PM


Lovely

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2014-01-15 01:31 AM


Superb, enigmatic.  So many haiku's don't lift off the ground, but this one does!

Owl

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2014-01-15 03:36 PM


Many thanks to all.

...just bein' Bluesy

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
5 posted 2014-01-16 01:25 AM


Very nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2014-01-16 03:40 AM


this is so quiet and appealing, the atmosphere is full of simplicity end grace, like in a dream, loved it,


yann

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