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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2014-01-14 08:42 PM

On rain we ran
to riverdance an intricate design

toes to the edge
of the mountain topped forests

returned, are these stirrings
finding me lost in your lure again,
the window scenes conjuring
with drizzle tone lights, and the
drifts of wind torrents

I can turn on the wipers, clearing
the simulcast, but digress instead,
letting the waterworks
play out all that is possible
(though not necessarily probable)

if just in the sweet sighs
of a girl's imagination.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (01-16-2014 08:27 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-01-14 10:24 PM

Beautifully and sweetly rendered, my dear Emma. What a beautiful poem remembering a special time, or if not, one that should have happened. Again, beautifully and sweetly rendered.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2014-01-15 01:35 AM

Yes, EmmaRose, rain can, indeed, do that, coupled with a poet's beautiful spirit and imagination. Exquisitely delicate, sensitive and nostalgic.

Owl

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2014-01-15 08:19 PM

Surreal and alluring as the warmth of a misty morning in a valley of dreams.

I love the magic in your imagination as reflected in your poetry.

...just bein' Bluesy

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2014-01-17 01:13 PM

fine imagery and Romanticism!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2014-01-17 06:24 PM

i love the rain and love this even better..

so wonderfully done as always Emma

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2014-01-18 05:53 PM

enjoyed...James

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2015-02-05 04:39 AM

as soon as I noticed the title I had to read - I love the rain & this was superbly written xx

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

MICHELMAS
Member

since 2012-02-15

Posts 305
Lancashire England

8 posted 2015-02-05 09:14 AM

Pitter patter of the pouring rain
Enjoyed
Michael

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