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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-01-14 08:03 AM




she pressed her body into mine
murmured quietly
near my ear
a wet warm tongue
slithered in
an age old sensuous custom
performed since the Garden of Eden
the sensation
worked on my emotions
as surely as would a lobotomy

©December 23, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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1 posted 2014-01-14 02:11 PM


deep and fascinating how your poem reveals a loving woman, enjoyed a lot as the illustration,

yann

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-01-14 02:20 PM


Yann, many thanks goes to you. Women. Men. So very different. Neither processes to understand each other, but lustful craving bring us together.

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2014-01-16 09:22 PM


enjoyed...James
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-01-16 09:23 PM


Hi James, thanks . . .

If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2014-01-19 01:55 PM


You are so clever! You make me smile.

Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-01-19 02:08 PM


Hah! And a lovely smile it is, Lori. Thank you for being here.

The good Lord didn't create anything without a purpose, but mosquitoes come close.

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