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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2014-01-13 05:54 AM


Beneath

I wonder,
If behind those clouds
The sun still shines brightly,
And warmth radiates
Even now.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2014-01-14 02:13 PM


Wonder too, sometimes we can't be sure of anything, thanks for the lovely write,


yann



Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2014-01-15 09:40 PM


For my love, the light and warmth is within her.

For me, I am always beneath the clouds.

Your poetry says it is so.

...just bein' Bluesy

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
3 posted 2014-01-16 01:16 AM


I wonder too! nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2014-01-16 09:32 PM


nice...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2014-01-18 05:59 AM


It does! We should indeed always be conscious of this truth.

Much enjoyed, dear Juju.

Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2014-07-30 12:01 PM


Always has for me, my friend... even as the rain falls - I Believe it's true.


j.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
7 posted 2014-08-02 09:08 PM


I'm sure it's shinning somewhere.  


Michael

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