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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 the nectar of goodness and gratification can be suspended when wild abandon emotions are running wild like now with an inadequacy of self you stand there flinging what you have concealed within your heart forever losing all sense of shame she is then Aphrodite the feminine glamour and charm wrapped up in a nineteen fifties kind of innocence ©December 18, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You come up with the most wonderful graphics! And this piece is marvelous! Your insights are always enlightening. Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Lori. I appreciate your own thoughts. If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
I enjoyed the poem and the visual on the contrast of the woman that shatters the core of the reader |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you for your comments, Emma. Hope things are good (as they can be) where you are. If the mob governs, man is ruled by ignorance; if the church governs, he is ruled by superstition; if the state governs, he is ruled by fear. |
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WindWalker12 Member
since 2009-10-17
Posts 57 |
O, this is so good!!! and I love the graphic. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've built the image of one of those early pin-up women in my head, wanton and sexy, as only Aphrodite could be. glad this popped back up since I've been back! ~d Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much, WindWalker12, I appreciate it. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, I was surprised to see this back up, devina, thanks for your kind words. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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